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    dots Submission Name: The lonedots
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    Author: net
    Elite Ratio:    2.9 - 21/14/6
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Story/The pain inside
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       I am just trying to make a good intresting story some based on what i have done in the rps.


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    dotsThe lonedots
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    why am i here why am i alive does the world i live in despise me im not sure anymore i thought i knew about everything but thats impossible i was fooling myself(lets out a breath)oh well......
    My name is trigger my last name is of no importance i am a half demon(wolf half demon like inuyasha is a dog half demon) i am the outcast of my village as a half demon i am thought of as nothing but they will find out they are wrong when i make them pay for what they did to me my mother and my brother.My mother was human and my brother as i was a half demon i say was because my village those i thought i could trust even torturd them to insanity then destroyed them i bear with me my mother's love and my brother's sword this is where my story really begins.




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      Kinda reminds me of a very twisted version of Inuyasha Trigger. I should draw your character some time. Oh and one thing that I really now you don't wan to hear is about spelling and punctuation, and grammer. I am sorry but that is the only thing wrong with this.
    | Posted on 2005-06-21 00:00:00 | by akaietowa-ru_18 | [ Reply to This ]



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