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A Changed Life


Author: Saaber
ASL Info:    20/m/BD
Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 101 /99 /26
Words: 97
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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A Changed Life



Life changed so much
When I started liking someone,
Life changed furthermore
When I started loving someone.
Life felt so empty
When I was unable to express my love,
Empty like nothingness,
Empty like my expression of love.
Everything in life turned meaningless,
Everything valuable became worthless,
Everything I had wanted was forgotten,
For that one person I started loving.
Every time I close my eyes,
It is her image that I see,
And when I sleep, I dream about her,
But I can't imagine when she finds this out,
What her reaction will be.




Submitted on 2005-06-19 03:18:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Damn women are crazy arent they. I know how you feel when you know that they will never be in your life. One thing that you must remember is that there is another one, who actually deserves your love.
| Posted on 2006-03-01 00:00:00 | by dustinamoody | [ Reply to This ]
  don't worry, she's gon like you! hehe- but not love you!
just kiddin!
so much emotion makes me cry so i'll move on to your next poem.
| Posted on 2005-12-06 00:00:00 | by obaid | [ Reply to This ]


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