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They are my babies, these grey and white rats of mine. I think I like them. ~*~ First week of summer, Sitting around at the lab Until the last week. ~*~ Penetrate their brains, ask them about decisions, pet them in between. |
I like the last one ^.^ Only because its so cruel... I know that sounds odd... I think you did an ok job writing these... ((Despite the fact that I despise haikus myself tee hee)) and I'm sure that your interesting line of work makes for some interesting observations. keep writing. -Alli | Posted on 2005-06-19 00:00:00 | by Childoutspoken | [ Reply to This ] | sounds like you have an interesting job. much better than mine.. a thouasnd times better. | i like the last haiku.. haiku's are hard to critique, they are short and usually to the point.. so i've got nothing else. | Posted on 2005-06-19 00:00:00 | by fallingingreen | [ Reply to This ] | Welcome to the wonderful world of haikus! Veru nice for your first go at it, and linking the three was good as well. | I really liked the last one, couldn't tell whether you were being really nice or just cynical. Haikus Rule! Be Happy Graeme | Posted on 2005-06-19 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ] | |