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    Author: myonlysalvation
    Elite Ratio:    2.11 - 41/48/42
    Words: 325
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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       this is a post specifically for a few people.srry. i really havent figured out how to completely use this stuff. i wrote a poem & a song down there too. thanx


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    dotsa message from me,dots
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    If there was a way
    i'd find a way
    if i could stay
    i'd never WANT
    to leave
    its hard to feel safe
    when you've got yr
    foot in the door
    its hard to stay
    warm, when i'm
    caught in the breeze*

    *(church inspired me to write this *sad* song)

    the company i keep

    Here comes the rain
    heres comes the rain
    seems like, things will, Never
    be dry

    YR life is wicked,
    yr mind is green
    YR lifes as wicked as the company i keep

    Here comes the rain
    here it comes again
    its hard to, stay clean, when yr
    caught in the breeze...

    yr life is wicked yr mind is deep.,
    yr life is wicked
    as the company i keep

    the company
    I KEEP
    the company
    I KEEP


    seems like...seems like... seems like.. things will never be sane.,....
    my mind is wicked my mind is weak
    my life is wicked
    as the company I KEEP


    i'm in virginia....just to let anyone who cares know. its been 4 days & NO methadone...which is very good 4 me. i've been horribly sick this weekend....but thanx to my newfound mommy & daddy i'm getting better.
    haha...i was just able to eat a bowl of cookie crisps... im very sorry for the people i left behind & didnt get to say good-bye to...
    restless but not empty...love always
    me






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      wow, I love this.. its great. I was sad that it had to end, I was so enjoying it. You are truly an excellent writer, and have written a great piece. Its sad, yet beautiful and touching.. can't wait to read your other work. ;)
    | Posted on 2006-03-22 00:00:00 | by jules271 | [ Reply to This ]
      now I'm sure ...
    you are a very talent song writer
    this song is beautiful sensitive ..and thatch the heart
    keep going you well be the one !
    | Posted on 2005-09-03 00:00:00 | by muhammed | [ Reply to This ]


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