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She cant love you

Author: JADE
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something for the girls who are "wifey material", letting their men know where HOME is. its not neccesarily wanting a cheater back, its about letting him know ULL NEVER FIND A LOVE LIKE MINE AGAIN,U STILL LOVE ME, I STILL LOVE U, AND YOUR NEW GIRL AINT S***! LOL

She cant love you

Im here to stay.
She cant come and take my place.
She may smile, and touch your face.
But who makes love to you any time, any place?

I got your back, when times are hard.
I wipe your tears, and and tend to your scars.
I hold you, and say baby its okay.
She comes around, when your having a good day.

For me its love, passion, and trust,
A Honest relationship that no one can touch.
For her its deceit, lies, and just lust.
You cant even tell her " I love you so much."

We're like the O Jays, we "Cry Together".
We're like Marvin Gaye we want to "Stay Together".
Shes like a one hit wonder, she dont matter to much, she wishes she could be me, but im on a level she cant touch.

She think she got you, but I know she dont.
She wants to fight me, but I know she wont.
Even if she's your new girl, and Im your x, I know you still love me, forget whose next.

Im the one with the special place in your heart,
even though right now we got to take some time apart. She knows that when your with her, your thinking of me. Im the one who got you to want a family.

Im Wifey, she's the Rebound chick. She keeps you busy, when missing me, makes you sick.
You look in her eyes and see me smiling, you touch her thinghs, and start frowning.

You miss my kiss, my lips, the way I used to switch my hips. You know old girl cant compare to this.

She hates me, cause you love me,
she wants you, but you adore me.
She wants my position, thats why she dont like me, but just because she's your girl, that dont mean Im not wifey.

One thing we all must admit, is that our relationship was the sh**. Everyone wanted to be like us, always in love, never was it lust.
If she ever gets in your head, and makes you think she controls your bed, REMEMBER one thing, and remember it well,

SHE CANT LOVE YOU, LIKE I DO, and she never will.

Submitted on 2005-06-20 13:20:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Hey girl,
This was something good you have going here. TammyAnnBruton is right...I don't see why you would want him back either. Once a cheater always a cheater...and one of my friends just recently figured that out...he cheated on me...then he went out w/ her and cheated on her. You shouldn't have to deal with this. At some points it is really hard to let go. I've been through it. You do have to let go at some point...cause you're going to end up being hurt...your much better than this. Let him know he can't mess with you and you ain't gonna be some left overs when his other girl ain't there for him.

This was an awesome write though. I love the flow...I really got into it. Keep up the great work you got a lot of talent in you....

| Posted on 2005-06-20 00:00:00 | by MiKkI25 | [ Reply to This ]
  I'm not sure what to say about this one, I mean it is a really good poem! It has good flow and the rhyming all goes together nicely but I cant understand how you could still want him?! How can you say how great the relationship was when obviously somewhere it really wasnt! I kept reading and hoping for the justification part that never came! You should be telling him off and that is it! You dont want that back again do you? I hope not cause you'll just get hurt again! He'll continue to treat you like that over and over again because he knows he can! You need to see this for what it is and from where I am sitting it sure aint love! Well enough about that, this was still a really good write! Take care!
| Posted on 2005-06-20 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]

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