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    dots Submission Name: your lovedots
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    Author: Ola
    ASL Info:    18/f/USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 221/187/42
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 464
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 569



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       ok, i hope u enjoy. just a lil somin somin i put together.


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    dotsyour lovedots
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    I'm a flower
    And you are my only seed
    w/o you my life would be
    unable to proceed
    I was a heart afraid of breaking
    yet you thought me to dance
    I was once afraid of risks
    yet you taught me to take a chance
    And when the night had been too lonely
    and the road had been too long
    when I felt love was only for the lucky
    and only for the strong
    I remembered that far
    far beneath the bitter snow
    was the seed that with your love
    in the spring began to grow.




    Submitted on 2004-04-09 12:44:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      it's a nice write. well done. but please write 'without' not 'w/o'. you should have the time to write the words in your poem out.
    | Posted on 2004-04-09 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]



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