Description: i've been writing poems for a while but generally they're happy poems addressed to people on their birthdays! otherwise i write in those moments when i'm completly overwhelmed.
i've never heard a bad word about my poetry but they've been read only by my loved ones!
OMG. I loved it, it was very powerful even for a short poem. "Kaleidoscopic dreams Unable to express" Loved these lines sounds like many of my real lifes dreams!
this was good. it was short and had really short lines. but it was more like sentances.. each a feeling all making a statment. your really very talented. you have your own form of writtng that expresses your creativity and feelings really well. i cant think of anything negitive to say what so ever. great job- jennifer
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