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    Author: marigold
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 182/203/89
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    The poet, sleeping fev'rishly
    clothes with his throbbing, tear-gilt dreams,
    a poet of divinity,
    whose flame-verse runs like limpid streams.

    Then on this new born seraph, he
    bestows his midnight song unsung,
    and lights his eyes with that fire's sea
    that cruelly his dread depths has wrung.

    Life's fleeting breath he finally
    begins to blow into his face,
    but fails, and 'midst tha ashes, he
    awakens in a wind swept space.




    Submitted on 2005-06-21 15:15:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow you have a lot of nice vocabulary, i like "Then on this new born seraph, he
    bestows his midnight song unsung,
    and lights his eyes with that fire's sea
    that cruelly his dread depths has wrung.
    " that part, its so nice. Keep it up. Btw some of your poetry is still untitled, i'd be nice if you put some title, its nicer. Its only my comment please don't angry if my words seems to attack you. C ya around m8

    -garnet4david-
    | Posted on 2006-01-06 00:00:00 | by garnet4david | [ Reply to This ]
      Beyond excellent-
    You captivated me like no other poem has
    This is genius
    The words you used
    Like wrung and 'midst
    Clearly show you have talent
    Especially with quality like this
    The emotion in the piece was awesome and
    Besides all that
    There were no mistakes
    Love it.
    Big Bill-
    | Posted on 2005-06-21 00:00:00 | by Big_Bill789 | [ Reply to This ]



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