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    dots Submission Name: The Emo Poem Part 2dots
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    Author: wordslinger
    Elite Ratio:    6.54 - 234/97/31
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
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    dotsThe Emo Poem Part 2dots
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    My Name is No longer John.
    Witness Protection Comes
    When you kill your whole family
    And say the Mafia did it
    Five weeks with Freud
    I cut him too
    Now all I gotta do
    is finish the job.
    I raise the scissors
    My name is no longer John.




    Submitted on 2005-06-21 22:19:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hahaha. Well i guess i shouldnt laugh.. But some how this struck me as comical. I think this is a great piece with a great story written with minimal words. These are my favourite types of poems to write. I think of them as written photographs.
    Good job.
    Ratio M. Ducet III
    | Posted on 2005-06-22 00:00:00 | by Ratiomeducet | [ Reply to This ]


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