I'm a bit confused. I read this several times but I dont think I get it?! It sounds like sex to me but the title throws me. It would be more appropriate to title it Self-control if it was sex related so I must be wrong?? I dunno I cant figure it out! Good thoughts though! Take care!
haha what this sounds like to me is that he was a "one minute man" maybe the self discipline you are speaking of in your title is the fact that he needs to pace himself and learn some self control so he can last longer.. i am not sure if i got this right but hey everyone comes up with their own conclusions this is just what i got out of it. good work:) ~*~amber~*~ feel free to read one of my poems and critque
Okay! Sounds like the case of a man with some good pipe that had a short night! LOL That's sad. Tell him to drink some liquor next time-and some red bull. Great piece and awesome details. Loved the language too.
haha.. I take this to be about a guy.. and quick sex.. are you dissapointed b/c you were to quick to jump the gun and you regret it? If I'm wrong help me out so I have a better understanding thanks.. definitely a differnt way to describe a situation and grab the reader