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    dots Submission Name: Waking Dreamerdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 600
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 868



    Description:
       Relative 2 a dream I had last night.

    Came to me early this morning.

    Love,Peace,Joy!!!

    Never doubt the greatness in you ALL ~

    "Be a Columbus to whole new continents and worlds within you, opening new channels, not of trade, but of thought." Henry David Thoreau


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    dotsWaking Dreamerdots
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    "Do not fear for she is not dead yet only sleeping..."

    As a mountain freed from slumber by the rumblings of the moulton lava embracing growth and change ~ "I AM".

    All the atoms forming this body are as the sum of all the experiences creating who ~ "I AM".

    Like the swift waters eroding path anew my thoughts have evolved and the current of thought brings me to a river of life renewed and still ~ "I AM"

    And as I float and envision how beautiful, truly, is this waking dream I let self drown to hear my Father's voice whisper through my soul, "though you think you are alone and that my love is unseen, <@> am with you.....always and love you because ~ "I AM"....

    & I surface again in rebirth......because "I AM"~




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      Loved this one of yours and the structure/phrasing of I AM is like a pure power piece that does inspire and bring out the human spirit of overcoming whatever troubles lay before us of in the past. And as wewak11 comments, somehow we stay the same. Great Write, girl. :)
    | Posted on 2005-06-25 00:00:00 | by childs | [ Reply to This ]
      great piece i like the concept of the stort as it paints a visual picture of life and some of its miracles
    thanx for your comment on hunger i am glad to no it was a good thought
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-06-22 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmmm, Tiff, this is truly a thoughtful piece, almost a collection of quotes, very inspiring, I must say.
    You paint a beautiful picture of how life's experience constantly changes us, yet, intrinsically, we stay the same where it really matters.
    Thanks Princess, very nice indeed.
    Be Happy
    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-06-22 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      This I find very interesting, I've written may things over the years and I don't think I have ever used this style of writing. It is very powerful and dramatic the way you wrote it. Excellent job.
    | Posted on 2005-06-22 00:00:00 | by kriley6497 | [ Reply to This ]


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