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    dots Submission Name: My Horrid Skills Part 2 : Emodots
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    Author: DreamofOrganon
    ASL Info:    17/f/your closet >.>
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 57/39/12
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Comedy
    Total Views: 262
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 815



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       This is really stupid. But, hey, I was effing bored. D:


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    dotsMy Horrid Skills Part 2 : Emodots
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    Oh, woe is me.
    My heart BLEEDS for you!
    Sigh.
    Can't you see my love?

    Since you don't,
    I must DIE.
    Slice my skin with this razor.
    Watch my blood flow for you.
    And I shall fade..fade...fade...
    Into the darkness.

    Whine, whine.
    Bitch and moan.
    I'd sacrifice all the tears,
    All the tears in my eyes.
    My wounds...shall never heal...
    Can't you save me?
    Save me from my hatred and pain!
    ....tear.....
    I'll love you
    Forever.
    Remember my death!
    I can only hope you'll take 2 minutes of your time
    To mourn for me.

    ...dies...poetically....




    Submitted on 2005-06-22 17:47:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Lol
    I needn't comment
    But I will
    Alright the whole poem is one big smudge of cliché
    Horrible grammar , Horrible everything
    But it's so great :)
    And emo too.
    Fine Job-
    Bill
    | Posted on 2005-06-22 00:00:00 | by Big_Bill789 | [ Reply to This ]
      He he I agree with Big Bill. This is funny and emo, but not as good as park bench. say that 5 times fast. :) It's about time that you posted again.
    Love and sloppy kisses,
    LeAnna
    | Posted on 2005-06-24 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]



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