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    dots Submission Name: TV Christian Ladydots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Misc/What is
    Total Views: 707
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    Bytes: 626



    Description:
       Stayed up watching a bogus Christian TV lady one night and she was just crazy...it originally aired in 1991,June 7. So you people should try and check it out...it's amusing and I would like to know what you thought about it...bah.


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    dotsTV Christian Ladydots
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    Peter- " I love you Lord"
    God-"Go feed my sheep"

    Regret-
    This is bad,so you say
    she tells us that Judas wasn't spiritual so he regretted, and regretting is bad it turns into

    Remorse-
    This is worse,cause she says that this is why Judas killed himself, and Peter didn't, cause Peter felt

    Sorrowful-
    And with sorrow she says that we can repent and be forgiven and depend on

    God-
    We love him so now we hide like turtles and feed his sheep...after we need to be like Peter, and not like Judas




    Submitted on 2005-06-22 19:04:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      So we have to walk around feeling sad? Yeah, she was crazy. I liked how you formatted this. The progression as you read down worked very well and the ending tied back to the beginning. Very good. Have a good one and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-07-30 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      i love the line
    'we hide like turtles and feed his sheep'
    now that hits the nail right on the head !
    all in all lori i think the poem is funny ... /yes funny but in love it ../. good job at making my day much better !
    JWI
    | Posted on 2005-07-30 00:00:00 | by J W I | [ Reply to This ]
      great singer you have for your pic pretty crasy he offed himself at the twilight of his career anyways havent seen you post in awhile i like the concept you chose here well put together
    thanx for your previous comments
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-06-23 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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