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    dots Submission Name: TV Christian Ladydots

    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Misc/What is
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       Stayed up watching a bogus Christian TV lady one night and she was just crazy...it originally aired in 1991,June 7. So you people should try and check it out...it's amusing and I would like to know what you thought about it...bah.

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsTV Christian Ladydots

    Peter- " I love you Lord"
    God-"Go feed my sheep"

    This is bad,so you say
    she tells us that Judas wasn't spiritual so he regretted, and regretting is bad it turns into

    This is worse,cause she says that this is why Judas killed himself, and Peter didn't, cause Peter felt

    And with sorrow she says that we can repent and be forgiven and depend on

    We love him so now we hide like turtles and feed his sheep...after we need to be like Peter, and not like Judas

    Submitted on 2005-06-22 19:04:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      So we have to walk around feeling sad? Yeah, she was crazy. I liked how you formatted this. The progression as you read down worked very well and the ending tied back to the beginning. Very good. Have a good one and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-07-30 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      i love the line
    'we hide like turtles and feed his sheep'
    now that hits the nail right on the head !
    all in all lori i think the poem is funny ... /yes funny but in love it ../. good job at making my day much better !
    | Posted on 2005-07-30 00:00:00 | by J W I | [ Reply to This ]
      great singer you have for your pic pretty crasy he offed himself at the twilight of his career anyways havent seen you post in awhile i like the concept you chose here well put together
    thanx for your previous comments
    | Posted on 2005-06-23 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]

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