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    dots Submission Name: Fairy Tale Filthdots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       This isn't about anything that's ever happened to me. I'm not a porn freak or anything (I've never partaken of it). It was inspired by Bright Eyes lyric from the song "Waste of Paint": " I am thankful that someone actually receives the prize that was promised by all those fairy tales that drugged us. And they still do me."


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    dotsFairy Tale Filthdots
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    We're all polluted by myths
    and the filth of fairy tales.
    Pornography is more realistic.
    Does love ever happen to people like us,
    or is it only for movie stars?
    Should I settle for soul-rotting sex
    with the first guy I can find?
    Pretending all of the time
    that he's a shining knight
    and pretend he's off to the Crusades
    when he gets up and leaves .
    Maybe that'll make it easier
    when he never returns.






    Submitted on 2004-04-09 16:47:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is good but the ending kind of is ...well cheesey-It's already understood that he is leaving and well I myself already knew he wasnt going to return. It seems to me like you don't really need that line about returning. other than that good work
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    | Posted on 2005-07-08 00:00:00 | by LameMansTerms | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh, I really like this one, Cuddle! very vivid at thought provoking. We really are fed to many fairy tales. (Escpecially about a lot of religions and holidays) Keep up the good work! ~Sicobe R. Crow
    | Posted on 2004-04-10 00:00:00 | by Crow | [ Reply to This ]
      cool lil poem, i like the last two lines, not sure why there kinda sad but i like them, and theres no such thing as a shining knight they all died a long time ago. but im being depressing so i'll leave now, thanks for sharing
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    | Posted on 2004-04-09 00:00:00 | by PryncessVynom | [ Reply to This ]
      WOW! this is incredible! fairy tales and happily ever afters kinda build lil kids up for a fall coz the they're just an ideal and real life aint like that. i LOVE how you end this... imagining he is a knight so its easier to pretend you aint hurt when he dont come back... really insightful write!
    | Posted on 2004-04-17 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Interesting thoughts definately. Do I detect cynicism? Actually, I couldn't agree with you more, and I'm young, so honestly, people younger than me associate fairy tales and happily ever after loves as dreams, not realities. To get to the point, I think this is great.
    | Posted on 2004-05-02 00:00:00 | by Wonder Passing | [ Reply to This ]
      i understand that u're not a pron freak. this tells me your being a little hard on yourself. don't worry tou'll find your knight. and his only crusades dhould be making you happy
    | Posted on 2004-04-09 00:00:00 | by Skillessbasterd | [ Reply to This ]
      mmmm...not quite sure most pornography is realistic *l* ... surely a reality to STRIVE FOR, but for the average person...

    *l*

    I liked this poem a lot...made me smile...I know that wasn't your intention, but it did...
    | Posted on 2004-04-09 00:00:00 | by Emerging Soul | [ Reply to This ]


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