Short and succinct. Some pieces are best left like that.
Nice use of line breaks, it definitely seems right the way you spaced it.
Who hasn't had a friend like that? False friends are everywhere, aren't they? It takes a while to identify who are true to you no matter what, and who aren't.
As always, poetry should describe something. And you did it with this piece quite well, in such short words. Thank you
I'd end with a question mark rather than a full stop after 'Who', but thats purely a personal preference....I think it signifies the realisation of the narrator, and his denial of this false friendship....but its up to you
I only hope you realised this sooner rather than later, and werent too burnt by it....
Its short, succinct and to the point...a mixture of contained anger and wistful regret....very nicely done
Submission Name: You Know Who
