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    dots Submission Name: "The Scream"dots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       One of my favorite paintings is "The Scream" by Munch (I think I spelled correctly?) & I oft wonder what inspired it? My son was afraid of it as a child so I painted a mural of angels and one had wings spread & holding the painting so he wouldn't be afraid.

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    dots"The Scream"dots
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    In Munch's masterpiece
    "The Scream"
    is the person awake
    or in a dream?

    Terrified as two
    figures near...
    a scream of terror
    and of fear!

    The sky's painted
    blood, blood red
    I have to wonder
    will he soon be dead?

    The bridge the end
    of this character's life
    No key to this man's strife....




    Submitted on 2005-06-23 17:23:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      interesting... doesnt come of as terrinly creative or overwhelmingly clever but its a nice simple poem... that i think a simple person will enjoy. Although it has some flaws i commend you on this effort to write.
    | Posted on 2005-06-23 00:00:00 | by Versifier | [ Reply to This ]
      Heehee I think this is good. IT brings life to such a morbid picture. :) I don't know what to say. It was light and fluffy but at the same time deep. It was marvelous!
    Cheers,
    ~Persephone~
    | Posted on 2005-06-23 00:00:00 | by Persephone | [ Reply to This ]
      Because I am very familiar with the painting, this poem is an excellent description in poetic form. good job and I hope to read more of your writings in the future.
    | Posted on 2005-06-23 00:00:00 | by kriley6497 | [ Reply to This ]


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