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Author:	sweet_rayne
ASL Info:	22/f/canada
Elite Ratio:	3.81 - 479/454/108
Words:	122

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	327
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this is basically about one of my best friends. thats about it nothing really extrodinary about it. i think it sucks but im sure if he were to read it he would love it. anyway any comments are welcome...enjoy

I never meant too.. dots

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I never meant to pull him in.
Or let him see the softer side of me,
That I tried so very hard to hide.
Hopefully he does not know that part of me.

I never meant to depend on him.
Why couldn’t he just let me be?
But as time moves on I realise
Just how much he can see

He learned about me by the things
That I say and write
When my world was as dark as night
He became the guiding light

He has heard me laugh, seen me cry
Learned my fears, and felt my pain
He has always thought he was just a man
But to me he will always be my best friend.

Submitted on 2005-06-24 02:11:55 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I am taken away by this baby. You still take my breathe away when I read your poems. This one especially, I feel like you wrote it for me. I will assume you did until you tell me otherwise. I am sorry we haven't spoken much lately, My phone is out of minutes and my internet only works when it feels like it. Please dont think that you are drifting from me, because you're not. I miss talking to you so much, it seems like its been a year, although its barely been a week. I hope I get to talk to you soon Baby. This poem really hit me deep, I just want you to know that you'll always be very special to me. Awesome poem baby. Love, Samuel
| Posted on 2005-06-29 00:00:00 | by Samuel Bielz | [ Reply to This ]
  i like this one alot once more i can relate and thats always good well sometimes it can be bad depending on what the poem is about but in this case it a faboulouse poem anyways you should read the last poem i just wrote i think it would make you laugh good luck girl talk to you latter
kristen
| Posted on 2005-06-28 00:00:00 | by darkonesgirl | [ Reply to This ]
  first of all, this is a poem about a friend of hers. she made that clear in the lines she wrote, aka. i'm not sure what poem you read but that's totally off. i love it, joy. and i know exactly who you're talking too, and i just sent you a message asking why you said a few things. but listen, it's really thought out and much appreciated. love ya kid, keep up the good work
| Posted on 2005-06-25 00:00:00 | by frozenflame | [ Reply to This ]
  I am rather confused. Are you talking about you and your friend that I am guessing is a guy. Do you love him or something? Just asking.

The wording on this thing was very intresting. Though I could have written a little more and maybe made it into a song. Though that is just my view on it.
| Posted on 2005-06-24 00:00:00 | by akaietowa-ru_18 | [ Reply to This ]
  this was ok. it didn really seem like a poem to me though. in some ways this poem was a lot like many others i have read on here. i think this could be a bit more descriptive..some more imagery.
| Posted on 2005-06-24 00:00:00 | by brokensmile | [ Reply to This ]
  that was the best poem i have ever read! do you know why? because it's real and you can tell, a poem about a best friend is a good poem and deserves to be called so.
| Posted on 2005-06-24 00:00:00 | by misty_of_moon | [ Reply to This ]

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