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    dots Submission Name: After War Thouaghtsdots
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    Author: akaietowa-ru_18
    ASL Info:    20/F/Belly of the Beast
    Elite Ratio:    3.68 - 101/125/64
    Words: 226
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
    Total Views: 906
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    Bytes: 1154



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       This is just a short story that I wrote when I was in the seventh grade and found the ability to write.


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    dotsAfter War Thouaghtsdots
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    Cold, cold and lifeless just like a dead body. This place used to be alive with so many people running around here and there. The buildings used to have so much life to them, the bricks as red as a rose that has freshly blossemed. O how this place has wated since I have been gone, its only been five years. How in the world did this become so horrible. I guees its the war and destruction that happened when I left. Everyones dead, just dead, but I guess it had to happen since the fates are playing a cruel joke on me. The sky has used to be so vibrant with the color blue, and the golden sun always smiled on this city. Kids always playing and laghing insanely on the streets. After they had to go home to their mothers with the warm gentle smiles on with a fresh batch of cookeis waiting for them. Now there is nothing but the ghostly memorys of thase days long past. Not even my parents waited for me, they probably died with the rest or escaped, who knows. Well I guess I should leave this god-forsaken place before I become trapped in it's claws to take me down with it. My final thought is that this city is dead and it can not live again.




    Submitted on 2005-06-24 03:22:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this does seem realistic. but some parts do have some errors of spelling or something so its making it harder to follow so if u fix those or explain those im sure it would be great.

    brenna
    | Posted on 2005-06-24 00:00:00 | by Day DreaMeR | [ Reply to This ]


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