I love your opening lines! Some people just cannot digest difference in others. I am certainly one who delights in all the different colours of my fellow creatures. It is what makes this world so beautiful and interesting.
LOL! I loved that! I can just imagine someone letting one rip in public...with all of those uptight ladies in their fancy hats...yeah! Anyway, I really don't see anything wrong with it...the grammer and spelling is mostly OK. Here is the only thing, you are supposed to have a punctuation mark at the end of everyline, be it comma, semicolon...yeah. On a couple of lines you didn't have a punctuation mark. But that's all!
Heh! This was a funny and witty poem. You have a lot of hillarious lines in the poem. I especially like the first verse. I liked how you wrote your poem in a way of telling people that someone had "let out gas" without really saying it. Ah, a little advice, remember to capitalize every sentence. Other than that, I thought this was a truley clever poem. ^_^