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    dots Submission Name: Random Thoughtsdots
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    Author: painofthanatos
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 684/571/86
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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       boredum. i know it sucks, lol.


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    dotsRandom Thoughtsdots
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    Silly random thoughts
    Keep jumping through my mind
    And they're begging me
    To take the time
    To write them all down

    Evlish angels
    Alphabet soup
    Stuffed animals
    Tadpole poop

    Black nailpolish
    Fluffy cat
    Creepy calendar
    Softball bat

    Flying circus
    Christmas mouse
    Bamboo stalks
    A dolls house

    Soda cans
    Paper back books
    Band shirts
    Recipes to cook

    Prom dresses
    Cowboy hats
    Old socks
    Woven Mats

    Blank CDs
    Johnny Depp
    Torn jeans
    Rocks I've kept

    Undrandomized thoughts
    Fill my mind
    As I open my eyes
    To thing behind
    Forever shut lids




    Submitted on 2005-06-24 11:46:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ha, I love the originality, no one has a spill like this, I do that every once in a while, those, are in fact the best poems by far, you get the most significant material... at first I thought this was an acrostic poem, because the first to stanzas ironically say SKATT EAST, but then nothing else comes of it, I don't know what SKATT EAST means but haha, you know, thought it was cool, that's what you should call this, it's so slick
    | Posted on 2005-12-27 00:00:00 | by vanhokinshtyl | [ Reply to This ]
      i liked this a lot. it made me smile.
    all the ideas flow together great and it kept me reading until the end. i liked your idea a lot, im goin to add this to my favorites. =]
    | Posted on 2005-07-30 00:00:00 | by wastedROMANCEx | [ Reply to This ]
      haha this one made me giggle :) but i dont get the last stanza...is there a typo somewhere? and ahahah what is "Undrandomized"?? thats a big word. anyway, yea, i know the feeling hehe
    sophie
    | Posted on 2005-06-28 00:00:00 | by sudie | [ Reply to This ]
      cute. Why not put the train of thoughts into rhyme? I liked your random ramble. Your list flowed by very well and made reading it enjoyable.
    ~VanillaLeaves
    | Posted on 2005-06-24 00:00:00 | by VanillaLeaves | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this it was very funny. I often think random thoughts when I am bored to. So it just proves people are really bored in life. lol
    | Posted on 2005-06-24 00:00:00 | by winterdove | [ Reply to This ]
      This was a nice fun poem. It had a few typos but I can't cast the first stone. It was very fun reading this. It flowed very easily and actually made me smile. Thanks for the cool read...

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    | Posted on 2005-06-24 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ]
      Ha ha! I just read Crypto's and this is similar but he had a "mother goose" theme.
    I love anything silly, and this is quite off the wall, nicely done, stay bored! lol
    Be Happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-06-24 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]


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