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Random Thoughts

Author: painofthanatos
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Class/Type: Poetry /Comedy
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boredum. i know it sucks, lol.

Random Thoughts

Silly random thoughts
Keep jumping through my mind
And they're begging me
To take the time
To write them all down

Evlish angels
Alphabet soup
Stuffed animals
Tadpole poop

Black nailpolish
Fluffy cat
Creepy calendar
Softball bat

Flying circus
Christmas mouse
Bamboo stalks
A dolls house

Soda cans
Paper back books
Band shirts
Recipes to cook

Prom dresses
Cowboy hats
Old socks
Woven Mats

Blank CDs
Johnny Depp
Torn jeans
Rocks I've kept

Undrandomized thoughts
Fill my mind
As I open my eyes
To thing behind
Forever shut lids

Submitted on 2005-06-24 11:46:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  ha, I love the originality, no one has a spill like this, I do that every once in a while, those, are in fact the best poems by far, you get the most significant material... at first I thought this was an acrostic poem, because the first to stanzas ironically say SKATT EAST, but then nothing else comes of it, I don't know what SKATT EAST means but haha, you know, thought it was cool, that's what you should call this, it's so slick
| Posted on 2005-12-27 00:00:00 | by vanhokinshtyl | [ Reply to This ]
  i liked this a lot. it made me smile.
all the ideas flow together great and it kept me reading until the end. i liked your idea a lot, im goin to add this to my favorites. =]
| Posted on 2005-07-30 00:00:00 | by wastedROMANCEx | [ Reply to This ]
  haha this one made me giggle :) but i dont get the last there a typo somewhere? and ahahah what is "Undrandomized"?? thats a big word. anyway, yea, i know the feeling hehe
| Posted on 2005-06-28 00:00:00 | by sudie | [ Reply to This ]
  cute. Why not put the train of thoughts into rhyme? I liked your random ramble. Your list flowed by very well and made reading it enjoyable.
| Posted on 2005-06-24 00:00:00 | by VanillaLeaves | [ Reply to This ]
  I liked this it was very funny. I often think random thoughts when I am bored to. So it just proves people are really bored in life. lol
| Posted on 2005-06-24 00:00:00 | by winterdove | [ Reply to This ]
  This was a nice fun poem. It had a few typos but I can't cast the first stone. It was very fun reading this. It flowed very easily and actually made me smile. Thanks for the cool read...

| Posted on 2005-06-24 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ]
  Ha ha! I just read Crypto's and this is similar but he had a "mother goose" theme.
I love anything silly, and this is quite off the wall, nicely done, stay bored! lol
Be Happy

| Posted on 2005-06-24 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]

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