ha, I love the originality, no one has a spill like this, I do that every once in a while, those, are in fact the best poems by far, you get the most significant material... at first I thought this was an acrostic poem, because the first to stanzas ironically say SKATT EAST, but then nothing else comes of it, I don't know what SKATT EAST means but haha, you know, thought it was cool, that's what you should call this, it's so slick
i liked this a lot. it made me smile. all the ideas flow together great and it kept me reading until the end. i liked your idea a lot, im goin to add this to my favorites. =]
haha this one made me giggle :) but i dont get the last stanza...is there a typo somewhere? and ahahah what is "Undrandomized"?? thats a big word. anyway, yea, i know the feeling hehe sophie
cute. Why not put the train of thoughts into rhyme? I liked your random ramble. Your list flowed by very well and made reading it enjoyable. ~VanillaLeaves
This was a nice fun poem. It had a few typos but I can't cast the first stone. It was very fun reading this. It flowed very easily and actually made me smile. Thanks for the cool read...
Ha ha! I just read Crypto's and this is similar but he had a "mother goose" theme. I love anything silly, and this is quite off the wall, nicely done, stay bored! lol Be Happy
Submission Name: Random Thoughts
