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    dots Submission Name: Random Prose 1dots
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    Author: Deadly Sauce
    ASL Info:    18--lady--NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.69 - 59/77/31
    Words: 302
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 307
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    Bytes: 1504



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       Dunno...it sounded nice when I wrote it...


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    I could smell the mint of her gum from across the room. Not like there was all that much along the lines of obstructions in the room; it was only her and me. Our glances met as she turned to look at the clock, and I bowed my head quickly in embarrassment. She was pretty, why shouldn’t I look at her? But instead I glared at my lap and pictured her. Her skin was as clean and soft as a newborn babe, her thin but smooth features added to her graceful movements, and she had the most gorgeous eyes I’d ever seen. I could see in her eyes that her innocent and virgin exterior sheltered a rebel. I saw myself. I saw us. And in that moment I knew we were meant to be together. But as soon as that exhilarating moment flowed through me, it shot out as my hope shattered. Just because I wanted her most definitely did not mean she wanted me. I mean, how could I even know if she would go for someone like me. I’m a unique sort of mate…but I couldn’t help but shake the confidence I had that we were destined for each other. Just as I started to work up the nerve to just lift my head again, the bell rang. I heard the swish as her knapsack got pulled off the desk and then she walked towards the door. As I waited for her to pass, I heard her stop behind me. I straightened up slowly in my chair, and she placed her hand on my shoulder. I turned my head slowly and she smiled at me. I stood and she slid her hand into mine. We walked through the halls and, despite the stares, I was happier than I’d ever been.




    Submitted on 2005-06-24 11:51:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well, that would be for ME. But it was meant to be a bit obscure, because lots of people think they're different...so it could be that they're like...masochistic or something, lol. But thanks ^_^
    | Posted on 2005-06-28 00:00:00 | by Deadly Sauce | [ Reply to This ]
      hmmm this was a different write that ive read. this is very modern/ realistic however u want to say it. is this about a lesbain girl??? thats what it seems to me. cuz in there it says "im a unique sort of mate".

    brenna
    | Posted on 2005-06-24 00:00:00 | by Day DreaMeR | [ Reply to This ]



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