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    dots Submission Name: Alice's Poisondots
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    Author: Thinkingofyou
    ASL Info:    18/f/The sunny state
    Elite Ratio:    2.83 - 283/423/132
    Words: 26
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 930
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    Bytes: 160



    Description:
       Well looks as if instead of the bottle of shrinking or growing potion Alice has picked up a poison filling her with clouded thoughts and uncertanty. This is not whats suposed to happen. So look back on your childhood and try to remeber what is.


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    dotsAlice's Poisondots
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    Define the world to me
    In a different view
    Mines caught fire.
    The windows are fogging
    And my wonderland
    Is laughing at me.




    Submitted on 2005-06-24 12:59:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Now I understand the old myspace name, shoulda read it before. lol sry it took me so long to comment. Great write my lovely! Don't change a thing.

    Blessed Be!
    | Posted on 2005-06-26 00:00:00 | by Sarah Leger | [ Reply to This ]


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