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    dots Submission Name: (1) Musedots
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    Author: JKPS613
    ASL Info:    17 / f / GA / USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.99 - 388/377/47
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 284
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 454



    Description:
       Yep...written for David...
    God, I am such a loser.
    When I read it, it's a fast-paced poem, but y'all can style it however you wish.


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    dots(1) Musedots
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    Trying desperately to jump back into the flow
    Of all that was once right
    To me.
    I need to see you,
    To hear you breathe once
    More. Must keep running towards the goal
    Of your mouth,
    Because your words
    Are treasures for my soul.
    My inspiration.
    My muse,
    God, you’re so much more.
    Keep talking.
    Let me drink your words
    To see them quench
    A thirsty page.




    Submitted on 2005-06-25 09:09:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      the poem was good but i think that your flow was of. when talkin about the persons body it was lustful the rest was lacking in feel. nice job good poem
    | Posted on 2005-06-25 00:00:00 | by BlackLace | [ Reply to This ]
      It's a cool poem. I like the form you wrote it in, and how the words you used speak the truth without all the frills. Your flow was a little off, but it was still good. Keep writing.
    Cheers,
    ~Persephone~
    | Posted on 2005-06-25 00:00:00 | by Persephone | [ Reply to This ]



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