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    dots Submission Name: throseornsdots

    Author: beatthedrum
    ASL Info:    55- F - Southern CA USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 881/810/122
    Words: 13
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Often poetry is used as a vehicle of expression or to make a point in a dramatic or insightful fashion. It works well in both those arenas.

    I also see poetry as a playground for words. It is a recess filled with wild energy, laughter, and fun.

    This falls into the last category. It is not a new device. I think it may be fun to decipher. Then again, it may simply be my silliness. In either case it fulfills my intent.

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    To be a throseorns
    you must show the
    sibeautyde and
    have yourloveheart.

    Submitted on 2005-06-25 09:43:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hahahahaha! This was so fun. It was also very good, and that's genius right there. I think it was so cool, and it was just wow. I'm speechless...which is odd. So good though lol. I love it.
    Peace and love
    | Posted on 2005-07-05 00:00:00 | by EmpathicAya | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey Chrys , this made my dyslexia go straight, so don't tell
    my kitten, I'm sure we're in for big trouble.

    I just know that poets were invented by words, so they would a valid reasons to live in our heads
    like dreams.

    you're full of roses, you petal pusher, you

    | Posted on 2005-06-27 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      to be a rose thorn
    you must show the beauty inside
    and have love in your heart

    very playful wordgame you have here Chrys. silliness is always a good thing for the soul. thanks!

    @ peace&roses @
    | Posted on 2005-06-27 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      Um, I was a little lost when I read at first, but then I understood it. It is cute and kind of a fun thing that you did. Really creative ; ) Congradualtions and good work ; )
    | Posted on 2005-06-26 00:00:00 | by Lauren Guzman | [ Reply to This ]
      Word salad, I donít normally eat rabbit food but this was palatable and fun, thanks.

    Remember, Learn & Create
    | Posted on 2005-06-25 00:00:00 | by mcgovern_xiii | [ Reply to This ]
      To be a throseorns
    you must show the
    sibeautyde and
    have yourloveheart.

    I have considered this carefully and using the World War 2 Enigma Machine deciphering device have elucidated the true meaning which is:
    To be a horse snort
    you must show the
    Betsy adieu and
    have oh you traveller.
    | Posted on 2005-06-25 00:00:00 | by hanuman | [ Reply to This ]
      um... words are jumbled together. i got what they were and its an interesting poem to read. nice and short too. it has much meaning in such little amount of words. two thumbs up
    | Posted on 2005-06-25 00:00:00 | by slntfirflm | [ Reply to This ]
      That was something interesting. I don't think I've read something like that before. And I don't believe I know what those words means. Heheh. Guess I'll have to look them all up. (Grabs dictionary) Waiiit... those aren't words, their words in words. How creative! Anyways, I think that was a complex, but witty way to write a poem. It was something completely different for me. And I enjoyed reading it greatly. :)

    | Posted on 2005-06-25 00:00:00 | by Segniust | [ Reply to This ]
      I love the fact that the way this works is one word is literally inserted into the other - much like the message of the piece...we have the literal and the metaphorical observations, and its simple, beautiful and complex all at once...much like the rose flower itself...

    I really enjoyed this Chrystine...you always have a spirituality to your work, and it leaves me with a very tranquill and thoughtful feeling...

    | Posted on 2005-06-25 00:00:00 | by Katia | [ Reply to This ]
      Spun like a master webspinner, hahaaa. This was fun to decipher and I have to thank idlewriter for making life easier on me, because I was a little febuleddd!

    Nice one!
    | Posted on 2005-06-25 00:00:00 | by Vancrown | [ Reply to This ]
      "To be rosethorns
    you must show the
    beautyside and
    have your heart love."

    I don't know...is this right-I thought I'd just do this for fun for the heck of it-I guess it was kind of fun-oh, well-

    but then again your right-you have to love in order to be rosethorns:

    What is they say about roses w/ thorns-I forgot
    Even the most beautiful roses have thorns-something like that

    Okay, anyways-
    | Posted on 2005-06-25 00:00:00 | by idlewriter | [ Reply to This ]

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