Description: Often poetry is used as a vehicle of expression or to make a point in a dramatic or insightful fashion. It works well in both those arenas.
I also see poetry as a playground for words. It is a recess filled with wild energy, laughter, and fun.
This falls into the last category. It is not a new device. I think it may be fun to decipher. Then again, it may simply be my silliness. In either case it fulfills my intent.
Hahahahaha! This was so fun. It was also very good, and that's genius right there. I think it was so cool, and it was just wow. I'm speechless...which is odd. So good though lol. I love it. Peace and love ~Azura*
Um, I was a little lost when I read at first, but then I understood it. It is cute and kind of a fun thing that you did. Really creative ; ) Congradualtions and good work ; )
To be a throseorns you must show the sibeautyde and have yourloveheart.
I have considered this carefully and using the World War 2 Enigma Machine deciphering device have elucidated the true meaning which is: To be a horse snort you must show the Betsy adieu and have oh you traveller.
um... words are jumbled together. i got what they were and its an interesting poem to read. nice and short too. it has much meaning in such little amount of words. two thumbs up
That was something interesting. I don't think I've read something like that before. And I don't believe I know what those words means. Heheh. Guess I'll have to look them all up. (Grabs dictionary) Waiiit... those aren't words, their words in words. How creative! Anyways, I think that was a complex, but witty way to write a poem. It was something completely different for me. And I enjoyed reading it greatly. :)
I love the fact that the way this works is one word is literally inserted into the other - much like the message of the piece...we have the literal and the metaphorical observations, and its simple, beautiful and complex all at once...much like the rose flower itself...
I really enjoyed this Chrystine...you always have a spirituality to your work, and it leaves me with a very tranquill and thoughtful feeling...
Spun like a master webspinner, hahaaa. This was fun to decipher and I have to thank idlewriter for making life easier on me, because I was a little febuleddd!
Submission Name: throseorns
