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    dots Submission Name: Tom the gleemandots
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    Author: Rue
    ASL Info:    16/F/the dark side
    Elite Ratio:    4.54 - 244/182/44
    Words: 218
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1444
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       This is about an RP character that I did not make up myself. Crow has that credit. {hope she doesnt mind... O.o }


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    dotsTom the gleemandots
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    7 centuries was time to pass,
    I spent it making children laugh,
    They always did giggle as they spoke,
    of my strange and multi-colored cloak.

    They remember my pranks and jokes,
    Couldn't wait to imitate for their folks,
    I can still see the crowds with their many faces,
    Motley clothes and shoes and laces.

    And how short did all of that time last,
    I made sure to thouroughly enjoy my glass.
    Fire whiskey was my normal,
    too much of it and no mere human could stay formal.

    I loved one lady through all my years,
    Never tempted by the many that craved me to call them my dears.
    'Twas her I loved and hold in my soul,
    as the ages pass that love never grows ol'.

    I've met many people in my travels,
    To forget a face is to let my mind unravel.
    From the city of thieves,
    My path does weave,
    To the glistening tower,
    And the lands others power.

    My trip is paid by my gleemans trick,
    The pretty roses and coins that I pick.
    With a snap of the fabric I'm gone from the stage,
    Making my way past both warrior and page.
    As they stare up in awe,
    At what they just KNOW, they thought, they saw.




    Submitted on 2004-04-09 22:16:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Still loving it. You little poetry-whore. -pokes- -sigh- yes...still love, I think I'll go play with him now...AND YES PEOPLE!! HE IS LIKE THOM THE GLEEMAN FROM THE WHEEL OF TIME!! sheesh. -.-" cept my Tom's an elfeh. O.o
    ~SRC
    | Posted on 2005-03-08 00:00:00 | by Crow | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey this is really cool. Being a fan of The Wheel Of time series I knew right off the bat who this was about. I wonder if anybody would know what a gleeman was unless they have read those books?

    Anyway the only thing that through me off was the first line:

    "7 centuries was time to pass"

    not sure what you meant by that, but the rest really fit well with the image of Thom Merrilin from Wheel Of Time.


    I would love to see more poetry on here about The Wheel Of Time, the only reason I haven't posted any is because I didn't think anyone would get it.



    nice writing here.


    peace,
    mister fizzle
    | Posted on 2005-01-29 00:00:00 | by Mister Fizzle | [ Reply to This ]
      I still love it. Gone over it again...yeah, still love it...lovelovelove! Its just so much like him I cant get over how you captured the feel of it all. And yes, the original sketching of Tom was taken from Thom the Gleeman in the wheel of time series by Robert jordan.
    | Posted on 2004-04-10 00:00:00 | by Crow | [ Reply to This ]
      ah, this is really good, this is the kind of stuff I really like to read, kind of got the medieval aura around it, awsome.
    | Posted on 2004-04-09 00:00:00 | by Anarius | [ Reply to This ]
      ::Fan girl screech:: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS JUST SO MUCH LIKE HIIIIMMMM!!!!!!!!! wow. I need to calm down...BUT ITS SO GOOD! GAH! ::slaps self and then starts jumping around again:: I LOVE IT! ::glomps again::
    | Posted on 2004-04-09 00:00:00 | by Crow | [ Reply to This ]
      OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGGGG!! RUUEEEEE!! I LOVEE YOUUUU!! THIS IS SO GOOD! ITS PERFECT!! OMG!! AAAUUGGGHHH!!! AHHH! I love it!! Thank you so much!!!! EEK! You just...WOW! You got his just right!! AUGH! WOW! I am so...AHH! ::Glomps:: I LOVE ITTTT!!!! ~Sicobe R. Crow!!!!
    AUUGHH!!
    | Posted on 2004-04-09 00:00:00 | by Crow | [ Reply to This ]


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