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    dots Submission Name: Nimbusdots
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    Author: OrionsStorm
    ASL Info:    16/M/VA
    Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 180/245/76
    Words: 237
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 280
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1608



    Description:
       This is written for an old friend of mine...I'll leave it at that, so you can get your own meaning from it.


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    dotsNimbusdots
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    she is
    your only friend
    her heart
    won't break but bend
    she floats
    not alive or dead
    she is...

    A nimbus
    she flies in the sky
    a nimbus
    riding the zephyr of her life
    she's a nimbus
    she says she has no feeling
    but why is she bleeding?

    her heart
    is broken now
    she gave up
    said she was being a cow
    she was coralled
    made to believe
    it'd be good
    and she could be free
    she said she gave up
    she gave up

    She's a nimbus
    flying high in the sky
    she's a nimbus
    riding the zephyr of her life
    she says that she's stopped feeling,
    but then why is she bleeding?

    She cries and she waits
    and she screams and she hates
    and she's mean and she baits
    but she pushes it all away

    'cuz she's a nimbus
    flying high in the sky
    she's a nimbus
    riding the zephyr of her life
    she's a nimbus,
    but she's falling down now
    'cuz she feels bad inside
    she says she wished she could die
    She is she is

    A nimbus...
    a nimbus...
    and she feels it for the moment, utter joy then it's gone
    and she laughs it off for the time being says she never feels inside her being but it doesn't really matter, doesn't really matter...

    Cuz she's a nimbus...and she's fogging up her life now...




    Submitted on 2005-06-25 15:34:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Excellent lyrics. I think this is definitely your best work yet. At least I feel I can relate to this work, except I don't consider myself a nimbus...
    I'm far past that kind of brightness.
    | Posted on 2005-06-26 00:00:00 | by eyv01 | [ Reply to This ]
      great lyrics i can almsot here the music to go with this. it's kinda sad and yet hopefull . it makes me hope her life is getting better or is she still here? it's great though
    | Posted on 2005-06-25 00:00:00 | by pandora22 | [ Reply to This ]



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