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    dots Submission Name: That Fateful Daydots
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    Author: magickandie
    Elite Ratio:    4.34 - 190/168/37
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Childrens
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       This is about the birth of my daughters.


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    dotsThat Fateful Daydots
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    On that fateful day,
    When the nine months had passed,
    It was time to bring new life,
    Into this world at long last.

    The labor was long,
    The pain was excrusiating,
    But when the angel handed to her,
    The new born baby, the pain was gone.

    As she gazed at this tiny being,
    She gasped with awe,
    And wept with joy,
    She fell in love, deeper than she'd ever known.




    Submitted on 2005-06-26 22:36:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aww nice to jear about a poem to yuor children... labor is difficult (I have heard lots of intresting stories hehe) In fact, when my Mom had my oldest borther (he was the firdt born) she bit my Dad's finger while in labor! But once she got through it she was happy as she gazed at her newborn son. Children are miracles- it's amazing how somrething so tiny can make such a difference in the world. You are a wondeful Mom for writing this.
    | Posted on 2005-06-27 00:00:00 | by Emmalee | [ Reply to This ]



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