Description: Went on a camping trip by myself & wrote this in the moonlight during the full moon.
All Encompassing -------------------------------------------
2 KNOW within your
2 SEE the purpose & the
2 FEEL the pleasure & the
2 LIVE like Abel & as
2 OPEN a door with only
2 HEAR His world as only He
2 TOUCH the sky with your
2 TRUST that Life isn't just
Yeah. I get this. Very nice. Simple yet expressive. I love minimalism. Sometimes being too poetic is just excessive. But, the question is begged: 2 do all of this leads 2 what? Is that what we are supposed to answer? Like Curly's "One thing" from "City Slickers" (which is a rip off of Nietzche's Uberman.
very deep and insightful. we alll need reminding sometimes that there is purpose in living. uoi expand more on idea. U doint like the repitition alhtough faith isnt falling blinding it trusting in what you know. This idea come across in the poem.
nice touch so true and very imaginative if we could only do some of those things there are people born that do go beyond the phenominum hope thats spelled right i have met a couple people that had the ability to do and say things others cant great write very picturous sandman