i liked it but as the person before me noted there are some misspelled words in this write. But i do like the imagry and the flow quite a lot. The style is very unique and i love it, keep it up:) *Samy*
i love it. its clear and the lines arw well writen. the feel was like you were talk to your self in your head about things you wanted to say and you put the reader their. it reminds me of how some poeple think befor they write a poem it clean and honst. i do have a few lines in mind that i like with a lot of reasons but ill just put 1:like your warm breath carressing my neck the first time we made love..it flows with the poem and its real and warm. well i like it lol thanks
I enjoyed the journal/diary feel of this write, which has a genuine intimacy. There are a number of misspelled words, which detrat from the read (the title included.) All in all, I found this a very moving write.