Description: I thoughts I would write a poem a about how a kiss should feel between lover. Afterall kissing is the closest portal to each other heart.
Kissing thoughts of You -------------------------------------------
Kissing Thoughts of You
Often throughout the day
thoughts of our lips embracing passionately
pushes aside any and all stress
by seducing the mind slowly savoring and surviving on the moment we last kissed
Images of pushing your hair back
to expose your gorgeous face came forward
Seeing those adoring eyes
speaking the language of love fluently
Inviting my lips to glide up and down your succulent neckline
pausing momentarily to suck fervently
Feeling you rise up on your tippy toes
wanting to succumb to my arousing gestures
As the rhythmic swaying of your hair
flows from one side to the another
making room for my warm rough tongue
Warm sensual rushes begin flowing between our bodies
with each rain dance our tongues dance
Nearly splashing our intimate passion over each other
though we dare not interrupt, nor cut short these kisses
Letting the musky scent and perfume fragrant
to induce a very intoxicating potion of ecstasy
Itís always so amazing to feel your innocence, trust and vulnerabilities
each time we kiss
Letting me know, I am loved now and forever
Six months ago, if I had read this I would've felt a little sick to my stomach and I would've proceeded to turn up my stereo (with some manner of heavy metal playing) and pretend like love did not exist. Of course, six months ago I lost someone I loved very deeply. Fortunately for me, and happily enough...love found me again. This time it has found me with renewed strength and with a more pure heart.
In reading this now, I couldn't help but smile as I was going from line to line. Love is quite amazing indeed. And kisses are most definately one of the most passionate gestures one can make to show love. I love how passionate this peice comes across. It's as if everything else is a blank page, except these words and the two people in love. That's what love feels like though. It's you and your beloved. Everything else feels absent.
As always I love your work. And I apologize for my absence for so long. I'm back though...and happy to start reading your work again.
This is indeed a very nice poem. Kisses are the most sensual and meaningful show of affection that two people who love each other can share. I have always thought that the kiss is the most important and romantic part of the relationship. They can be simple and sweet or passionate like the one you have described here. I like the way you described this kiss. You captured this moment that you two shared very well with your words and your descriptions are nicely expressed. Very passionate and romantic poem this is. Nice job writing this one. Take care.
i'm pretty sure that you have already heard from many people what a talented writer you are. you just capture emotion so very well! love all you pieces...there can't even be criticism to be done...if that made sense...lol great job!
"Succulent neckline"....that is just so.....both slightly dark and wonderfully erotic..but not overly so....its one of those images that are simply perfect....and one wonders how its not been thought of before.....
Ive only got one tiny teeny suggestion to make -
"with each rain dance our tongues dance" - here, you've got 'dance' twice in the space of 7 words, which makes it a bit of a stumbling block...maybe change the latter 'dance' to 'perform'...or something along those lines....
Other than that - this is gorgeous. Sensual, evocative...it leaves the reader with a slighty giddy, dizzy feeling of post-kiss desire......
That's hot! I felt that as I read it reminiscing on my shorty tippy toeing to plant the luscious one on my lips. This piece reminds me of how special love is. It also informs me that you can say a lot with your lips without talking. Welcome back Ed and a piece well done.
ed, a very pleasant and unexpected surprise to see you drop by my page. it has been too long i hope you are well and everything is going as you would like it to go. let me know what you have been up to and how you are.
as for your piece, well indulgent it certainly is and you have sardinepacked it full of voluptuous images which i am sure would arouse most to want to kiss. certainly better than some of the alcohol and fag smelling ones i have had on a night out! i would say that you have perhaps overused the word kiss in your piece, i think i counted about four, and i think it would be more effective if you could avoid that repetition. but once again you offer something different and your individual perspective is refreshing
beautifully done! I will admit that I blushed while reading this...it had been sooooo long since I had been kissed like this...but reading this I couldnt help but to relieve each moment I'm with a friend...
I love it when you write like this...mostly because it's proof that yes y'all...men do have romantic thoughts! and then the other half is because you do so with such imagery that I for one always get caught up in the muse...EXCELLENT!
To be kissed in such a sensual (emotional) and passionate(physical) way that the memory of it lingers in our mind and heart for days, and on. This, is such a kiss. Awakening all senses to the moment. Each line is alight with passion. A very enjoyable read for me. Maybe the last line in the first stanza could be made into two.. to fit with the rest of this lovely write? Welcome back! ~ Sandra
Wow...is it getting hot in here or what? This was a wonderfully passionate poem and to kiss like that is amazing! You did an awesome job capturing that moment and it was exquisite! Great job...look forward to reading more! Candi
Good job. Most men think of kissing as something they have to do to get to the REAL thing. I hope that this was not just written to your imagination, but to someone really lucky. It is so good to have you back. You have a real talent for writing the erotic not just the explicit. Lynn
Bravo! Lol im only 16 so i dont think that i have had a kiss like this yet! lol But i hope that one day it will happen and when it does i will remmeber this poem...lol Very great des riptions and good use of analogies...Your emotion is really expressed and i think that is what makes the poem so special...By the way excellent title too...Your style of writing is superb! Well i guess i should stop rambling! AWESOME JOB! RandiKae
Sensual, sensational, superb, smooth as silk is this poem of yours. It glides off the tongue and across the page in a hypnotic rhythm that threatens to engulf the senses. You have such style when it comes to sensual writing and manage to capture the true essence of the emotion without any doubt. Wonderfully written!
Well, I can see, you've come back with a real PASSION for writing. This was great Ed. Your love poems are absolutely beautiful. Your gentle way of expressing love needs no graphic details, which many think is needed to get the image across. Here the images appear in our minds allowing us to create the picture of true love that lasts a lifetime. Good comeback, Ed. Carol