This takes me back to when my sons father disappeared. Of course, looking at my son, he looked alot like his father, so it was a constant reminder. Being that we had a child together, it was a blow very hard to get over. Actually, I think I'm still not over it. Still healing I guess. I really enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing.
good even flow. i've never really felt this way, although brought it to me. i can imagine after a good thing, it would be hard to love again...perhaps one wouldn't want to for a long time, i know i might not...but one may never know, it's ka. if you follow stephen king at all. take care
This has such a a singsing feel to it. The form is different and very creative. I enjoyed the way it helps the readers flow through each stanza to make one complete piece, yet separates each part enough to make the reader pause and reflect on each emotion and thought. Very well done. Thanks for sharing, -Chell-
Hey, I like the styling you used here, instead of boring old lines. Each piece seemed to talk of a seperate time frame in the heartache of losing love's battle. Wow, I read it again, it's almost perfect! Sorry, but I have no criticism, only praise, very well written
I like the simplicity of this. It is a common feeling and is well conveyed by your lines. If this happened to you then I am sorry an I hope that you got your feelings out by writing it. Good job. LeAnna