What an inspiring piece... each part flows with the other and just rolls off the tongue. If only there were more out there like you who want to "give" joy to others.. through a smile, a song, a laugh, a thought, a tear..and through devine breath. Very nice Tiff. I enjoyed reading this. ~Sandra
Hey, this is one of the best "Tiffspeak" poems you've written, even the repetition didn't spoil it. Nice, beautiful thought, PT, and obviously sent with the abundance of love that lives in you. Simply lovely Be Happy Graeme
I like the feel of this poem. It has a heartfelt sentiment conveyed in the words simplicity. I was a bit thrown off by the flow at first but i did enjoy it once i realized that the ascii symbols were an eye. good job!