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    dots Submission Name: true poisondots

    Author: dylanpoe
    ASL Info:    21 m la
    Elite Ratio:    4.09 - 322/332/56
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 744
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       This was just an icebreaker. lol felt like having some fun, if you dont have laugh when you read this you aint got no sense of humor

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    dotstrue poisondots

    Can you close your eyes and say that was me?
    Can you look in my eyes and truly believe?
    Dont honestly think that was me and not you
    You know that poison only comes
    from twisted souls like you
    Stop putting on a disguise, you aint playing a part
    Just stand up, say I'm sorry
    and claim that nasty ass fart

    Submitted on 2005-06-28 21:44:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    Here is the dylan that I know! The one I so remember. WIth your humor. That's what made me grow to like you so much. I knew if I came to your page I was bound to catch a chuckle. Thanks babe for the smiles you bring me. They mean a lot!
    | Posted on 2005-06-29 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a poem I need to dedicate to my honey! (But you didn't hear that from me.) This was very funny. I needed a good piece of humor tonight, and you disguised the last line so well I never got a 'whiff' of the way it would end!!

    Thanks so much for the giggle!
    | Posted on 2005-06-29 00:00:00 | by Chell | [ Reply to This ]
      Funny... No really i mean it. I didn't laugh out loud. It just made me smile. And i really liked it because i haven't smiled all day. Thankx. I aprecaite it. :-)
    | Posted on 2005-06-28 00:00:00 | by Kay | [ Reply to This ]
      Haha! That made me laugh. Thank you! I needed a real good laugh. real suprising too. I didn't expect the last line...ya..thats about all I have to say. Thanks for the laugh!
    | Posted on 2005-06-28 00:00:00 | by MorbidAngel114 | [ Reply to This ]
      OOOOOOOh...very shortwinded!lol. I got a kick out of this one. You portrayed hurt feelings. Then you bounced back giving a direct order to the real culprit to stake a claim. A moment in time for all the "falsely" accused. You have a great sense of humor. Your poem was outstanding! Wanda (bigfineq)
    | Posted on 2005-06-28 00:00:00 | by bigfineq | [ Reply to This ]
      lol well i read it so now i have to reply i just dont know what to say to something like that...im going write it down on pa small pices of paper lol take it with me ever where and talk it out and read it when the time is right or when the air is ripe lol funny
    | Posted on 2005-06-28 00:00:00 | by BlackLace | [ Reply to This ]
      Ha ha ha, I must have a sense of humour!
    very good, I never saw it coming, actually I was wondering where the hell it was going, nice surprise at the end.
    Bloody funny, well done
    Be Happy
    | Posted on 2005-06-28 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]

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