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How to stop crying


Author: Hidden_depths
ASL Info:    20/F/England
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Not sure on title of this one but I really like the poem itself. Wrote it on one of my more pensive days and everyone has feeling like this at some point I'm sure.


How to stop crying



I'm crying again and I'm not sure why,
Nothing has changed and the sun is still high.
No ones come in and there's no one to leave,
So where are these sobs from that make my chest heave?

My face is all wet from a torrent of tears
And my eyes have been stinging for what feels like years.
My cheeks are all red and my hairs looking tatty
But there's nobody here to tell me whats happening.

I'm crying again and now I know why.
Nothing has changed and the sun is still high.
I know where these sobs come from that make my chest heave,
Because theres no one to come in and no one to leave.

Theres no one to wipe a tear from my eye
And no one to stroke my wet hair while I sigh.
You left me last week, now my heart is all shattered
And there's no coming back, your body is ashes.

Now my bodies frail though my viens pulse with blood,
And my heads full of words that cannot be said.
You're the only person who understood.
No one else could do that with just one look.

I'm crying again, the reasons the same.
My soulmate has left me and it's heavens gain.
How can you leave me, I want to know how?!
So I dying of pining with love for you now.

I can't live without you, it just cannot be,
So I'm coming to find you, look behind you and see.
I'm not crying anymore and a smiles on my face.
My heart has stopped beating, we're together in space.




Submitted on 2005-06-29 10:19:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  really great poem totally awesome this poem was made for me! lol (i recently broke up wiv my x and all ive done is cry) i totally love this line

'i'm not crying anymore and a smiles on my face, my heart has stopped beating, were together in space.'

totally awesome man lol keep writing i'd love to read more of your writes
take care

izzi xxx
| Posted on 2005-09-17 00:00:00 | by fallen_angel384 | [ Reply to This ]
  That is really good...im not sure why others havnt left comments on this one...it made me feel very sad and i am sorry for your loss if it is based on your own experience..
| Posted on 2005-09-12 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]


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