Eternal Love by Draco

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Submission Name: Eternal Love dots

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Author:	Draco
ASL Info:	19/ Male / PA
Elite Ratio:	2.91 - 103/111/21
Words:	70

Class/Type:	Personal Quotes/Love
Total Views:	354
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	440

Description:
I wrote this for a girl I love and made a big mistake on letting her go and I'm hoping showing this to her with a note of how much she meens to me and a with a rose i hopefully can get her back but if this doesn't work then i don't now what will.....well anyways enjoy

Eternal Love dots

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Your eyes are like endless sun sets,
that I will always ador...
Your smile is like the sun,
More brighter than its sun rays...
Your touch gentle and loving,
with which each tound I fall more in love...
Your lips of ever loving kisses,
Which puts me into a world of fancy...
Which I wouldn't want to lose,
For I give you my eternal love,
And forever will be yours...

Submitted on 2005-06-29 11:47:55 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
  Man craigle, we do got lots in common, no wonder were good friends lol, u write dat about tiff? duh probly... well anyway ill ttyl, call me sometime, i would but i cant remember u # lol...cya dude, by da way, love da write
| Posted on 2005-07-04 00:00:00 | by Solemn Star 88 | [ Reply to This ]
  awwww how freaking sweet! if she doesnt come back to you then she has some very big issues and needs to get over herself! this was the sweeyest poem ever!
"Your eyes are like endless sun sets,
that I will always ador"
that was my favorite line! good job! hope life works for you!
~akaila evonne~
| Posted on 2005-07-01 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]
  wow , this is so much better than before , you really listened to what i said , about thinking of her when you write, what shes looks like and how she makes you feel , well you have done it very well , i hope it works for you.
take care Lainie
| Posted on 2005-06-29 00:00:00 | by lainie75 | [ Reply to This ]
  Very beautiful. This piece shows how much you really love this girl. I felt your emotion. And the imagery was very visual. Great write.
Alissa
| Posted on 2005-06-29 00:00:00 | by Geraldine | [ Reply to This ]
  very nice so many ways to express the love you have for someone well written and enjoyable to read the images you paint are from the soul i guess thats where poetry and love start
sandman
| Posted on 2005-06-29 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
  I believe I've read that same description before. Perhaps on another poem of yours? It was nicely written, though. I'm sure she'll appreciate it.
Lies
| Posted on 2005-06-29 00:00:00 | by Lies | [ Reply to This ]
  Beautifully written with everything you need to say right there. I'd go all gooey inside if that were me. Hope it works out with her.
Hannah
| Posted on 2005-06-29 00:00:00 | by Hidden_depths | [ Reply to This ]
  if i were her that would make my heart melt. i hope it works out for you and her.i loved it its a great write.i look foward to reading more from you.

gena
| Posted on 2005-06-29 00:00:00 | by luvy | [ Reply to This ]
  aww. . . you realy love this girl. This was a good write a little short but still good. I hope it works out for you.
Sarah
| Posted on 2005-06-29 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ]

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