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    dots Submission Name: However "IT" ISdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
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       This piece was done in an artful fashion & it's hard to duplicate here also because of the accompanying drawing ~ I'm never sure how these translate so????

    "But what of those to whom life is not an ocean, and man-made laws are not sandtowers,
    But to whom life is a rock, and the law a chisel with which they would carve it in their own likeness?"....."What shall I say of these save that they too stand in the sunlight, but with their backs to the Sun? they see only their shadows, and their shadows are their laws."...."But you who walk facing the sun, what images drawn on the earth can hold you?"
    Kahlil Gibran, The Prophet excerpts on Law.

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    dotsHowever "IT" ISdots

    Envisioned Dreamz
    take action

    For my Father's wordz
    take precedence

    There is X law or rule
    upon purposeful


    does imagine
    Divine Vision

    ever remindful
    Echoing "IT's" voice

    share experience
    without criticizing reproach


    Submitted on 2005-06-29 12:25:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      NICE TOUCh THeSE POEMS YOU WRITE GIVE YOU A DELICATE BALANCE IN LIFE I THINK ONLY CERTAIN PEOPLE HAVE IT a great gift to have sorry about caps i like the meanings i percieve behind this thanx for your comments
    | Posted on 2005-06-29 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]

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