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    dots Submission Name: However "IT" ISdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 589
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    Bytes: 710

        This piece was done in an artful fashion & it's hard to duplicate here also because of the accompanying drawing ~ I'm never sure how these translate so????

    "But what of those to whom life is not an ocean, and man-made laws are not sandtowers,
    But to whom life is a rock, and the law a chisel with which they would carve it in their own likeness?"....."What shall I say of these save that they too stand in the sunlight, but with their backs to the Sun? they see only their shadows, and their shadows are their laws."...."But you who walk facing the sun, what images drawn on the earth can hold you?"
    Kahlil Gibran, The Prophet excerpts on Law.

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    dotsHowever "IT" ISdots

    However "IT" IS

    Envisioned Dreamz
    take action

    For my Father's wordz
    take precedence

    There is X law or rule
    upon purposeful


    does imagine
    Divine Vision

    ever remindful
    Echoing "IT's" voice

    share experience
    without criticizing reproach


    Submitted on 2005-06-29 12:45:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      intricate1 helped me C the vision in this one...
    That ol' Gibran feller seemed to stir sumthin' up inya...
    I kaint think of a better feller to be inspired by...
    I bet he'd like it...wether he could wrap his brain around it er not...I can't...and its STILL KEWL!
    You Rock Original!
    Good one Pipher"IT"agoogle...
    | Posted on 2005-07-03 00:00:00 | by Deep Ace Thinks | [ Reply to This ]
      Interesting. I think that about sums it up. lol. Anyway, it's good to see someone taking an original turn with their writings and giving the readers something which no one else can. This got me thinking... and thinking some more... but comprehension failed to surface... but it's good to see some original thinking!
    | Posted on 2005-06-30 00:00:00 | by JimweiZERO | [ Reply to This ]
      This is also uberly original. It's like a piece of art, that they can look at if they tilt to the side, and seem something different, and that my friend is skill. I didn't get it either, but the words were beautiful. The numbers seemed like subliminal messages, but also like the poem would crumble if they weren't there.
    Peace and love,
    | Posted on 2005-06-29 00:00:00 | by EmpathicAya | [ Reply to This ]
      *cocks head to the side*
    *wipes screen*
    *puts glasses on*



    Just kidding. I don't get it. But I just want to comment on the fact alone that you would take something like this on. That alone is art within itself. So I must say that this is magnificent.

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2005-06-29 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm not that familiar with Gibran's work...but I'll have a go at this.
    Our dreams become reality,.. our father's words mean more than pretentious words,... we should be able to share our experiences with one another without fear of reproach.
    Some interesting and thought provoking points. That is, if I was anywhere near getting the meaning.
    | Posted on 2005-06-29 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      It is clear that this is a very uniquely original piece but I don't quite get it. I'm sure you'll explain it to me. I like the format but I just wish that I knew what the piece was actually saying...

    | Posted on 2005-06-29 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ]
      Interesting piece. Don't quite understand this one, but it is interesting. I think the drawing would help shleps like me a lot...


    | Posted on 2005-06-29 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]
      very contemporary and original. thought provoking as well. I like it although I am not sure what the significance of the numbers might be. perhaps I need to be more familiar with Gibran. nice work, just the same.
    | Posted on 2005-06-29 00:00:00 | by sierramuse8 | [ Reply to This ]

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