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    dots Submission Name: Conversation with Naturedots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
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       An essay I wrote yesterday sitting by the river.

    I also then read this quote by Gibran, "Man's needs change, but not his Love, nor his desire that his Love should satisfy his needs." The Prophet


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    dotsConversation with Naturedots

    Ah, how many times I've sat by this river's edge,
    yes, since the days of my youth; watching, feeling, pondering.

    As I have eroded and evolved so do the banks, too, everchanging with time. The current waves to me, in passing, a blessed example of ongoingness.

    Too, I am reminded; "the tide is high yet sometimes low", and in every action and reaction; purpose is nestled.

    Oh, but how the sun is ever watchful, too, an electric burst of change. Soon, Sister Moon, as equally everchanging, yet too, always constant, will trade day for night. And I feel, this too, a perfect relation of darkness and light. Revealing to me; our preferences to 1 are all relative.

    Balance and respect for infinite, recognizing that change, evolution, ongoingness are as the ebb and flow of ALL. Even our dependent consistencies are only partially so. Celestial nature indicatively so!

    Back to the river's edge, conversing mountains, steadfastly so. And, as the crickets begin to chirp; a new song and an old, I am rejoiceful to 1 and All for this remindful lesson of soul ; > }

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      Tiff, this is wonderfully meaningful.
    Mirroring your sojourn by the riverbank, your piece starts out on Earth, then with the mind's pondering, trancends mortal plane and drifts into fantasy and contemplation, to drift quietly back to your riverbank after another reminder of the meaning of life.
    Does that make sense? Your poem does.
    Be Happy
    | Posted on 2005-06-30 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow! This is one of your best. I got hand to you, I liked it. Its amazing how one place that we often visit can bring so much inspiration. I too like the line:
    "in every action and reaction: purpose is nestled"
    nice job. good work
    | Posted on 2005-06-30 00:00:00 | by fiery_eyes | [ Reply to This ]
      This was really lovely- It seemed as if it would be dense at first and I started to pull away, but it read so easily and flowed so well. I liked "in every action and reaction: purpose is nestled"
    The last paragraph was beautiful - Thank you for that!

    | Posted on 2005-06-30 00:00:00 | by SHRINKSDR | [ Reply to This ]

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