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    dots Submission Name: True Independencedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 710
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       A prayer for myself and everybody else. May this holiday we be thankful for all of our freedoms and may we find the greatest freedom of all within ourselves!

    Great 4th!

    Love,Peace,Joy!!! epiphany ; }


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    dotsTrue Independencedots
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    With ALL you enable me to BE
    Through Choice
    Enlightened

    2 ALL within BEING

    For all in nature instinctively ARE
    and question not their BEING
    but LIVE ~

    Yet, we have been allowed growth
    through Experience
    A Flower 2 Bloom of Freedom
    or wither in fear....

    I see you, Great Spirit, in Everything and I pray that daily your light may nurture the flowerz of this realm....
    ....that we may grow and flourish in honor through grace and that our seeds may scatter to the winds in strength of what is yet 2 BE Sown.

    Infinite.....Love,Peace,JOY!!!




    Submitted on 2005-07-01 14:34:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yes'm..."growth through experience".
    Definitely the way to flourish...living...learning from tragedies, triumphs, mistakes, miracles.
    Your prayer was well received, and well concieved.
    May your seeds fly far, and may the sewing never end...
    good one Piphlefree...
    I liked it allottalottalot!
    ROCK THE HELL ON!
    D.A.T.
    PS...
    Did I say ROCK THE HELL ON?!?!?!?
    | Posted on 2005-07-03 00:00:00 | by Deep Ace Thinks | [ Reply to This ]
      Woot, that was a happy poem, and I felt like a bird when I read it. Marvelous, marvelous. It seemed like well like paper blowing in the air freely, or something alone those lines. Really great job.
    Peace and love,
    Aya
    | Posted on 2005-07-01 00:00:00 | by EmpathicAya | [ Reply to This ]


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