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Author:	MMISS
Elite Ratio:	2.68 - 502/489/149
Words:	245

Class/Type:	Lyrics/Serious
Total Views:	341
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	1587

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wrote this last year. it's a re-sub.actually my niece recorded it and made it sound beautiful! if anyone would like to download it email me at: annmissildine@wmconnect.com

MY AMERICA dots

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I was thinkin' about my country
when I boarded that big plane.
I turned around and I saw beauty
as far I could see.

I am proud to be going
to help fight to keep her free.
That's the reason that I'm on my way
That's what she expects of me.

Said I'd be comin back soon
and get down on my knees.
I'll kiss the soil I'm standin on,
This land of the brave and free.

My America
My America
God gave this land to me.
My America
My America
Where I'm blessed and I'm still free.

There were many close calls
every where I turned.
I seemed to avoid it all,
but this one time I learned,
I won't be coming home.
The Lord said He needed me
the reason for my bein gone
only you will see

So if I had the chance to ask you
to do one thing for me.
Stand up tall, walk outside
and kiss the soil for me.

My America
My America
God gave this land to me
My America
My America
where I'm blessed and I'm still free.

Thank God for America
I can be what I wanna' be
In America
My America
for you and me

My america
My america
God gave this land to me
My America
My america
where I'm blessed
and I'm still free.

Submitted on 2005-07-02 21:31:36 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Ahh! I'm getting goosebumps and I'm not even finished. That's a good thing, because when I get goosebumps, it means its really good and has an effect on me. I love the part where you put

"Stand up tall, walk outside and kiss the soil for me."

I agree with you. We should be proud to be Americans and help to protect and envelope our home that God did give us.

~Miku~
| Posted on 2005-07-21 00:00:00 | by WindEmpress | [ Reply to This ]
  It was alright
It had crafty lyrics
And showed your skills
But I can't say I would agree
I believe america is in a rut
And yes
It is what we make it
But even if I try as hard as I can to change it
It wont be changed
People need to "wake up and smell the coffee"
We didnt start this war for Osama, or Saddam
It wasn't about that
It was about greed
And power
But everyone has their opinions and so do you
So i'm not stopping you
Good Write-
Big Bill
| Posted on 2005-07-03 00:00:00 | by Big_Bill789 | [ Reply to This ]
  Did you have to go to the war in Iraq of something?

I am just wondering cause some things indicated to that. If you didn't and just wrote it for the heck of it then it was good plain and simple just like a song should be. The chorus is beautiful for even the sun shall shine. I am speaking like this cause I write lyrics all the time for my cousin's band. Some times I think I am just their slave. I may be 14 but I am still a human being!
| Posted on 2005-07-03 00:00:00 | by akaietowa-ru_18 | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a wonderful piece...what a nice tribute to all who have and are serving this country...It brought tears to my eyes...what feeling I felt in your words...We are all so blessed to live in this land of the free...Thank you so much for writing this and sharing it with us this Holiday week end...Bless you...Desi
| Posted on 2005-07-03 00:00:00 | by Desi | [ Reply to This ]
  This was awesome!!! It's so nice to see people who appreciate their country. Too often all you see are people bashing it. The flow was great! The rhymes were totally on! Again, awesome job!
| Posted on 2005-07-02 00:00:00 | by AngelOutlaw | [ Reply to This ]
  i like this it made me feel patriotic. You can realy tell that you love your country. i have to ask though were you a soldier. Are you still a soldier. i aslo think this would make a great song to.keep up the good work.
| Posted on 2005-07-02 00:00:00 | by luvy | [ Reply to This ]
  When i read a poem about america i am always delighted to see a stand in what the person's belief of what america is... I believe in what you wrote.. that is my america as it is everyone eles... i loved the flow. It made me think of my grandmother's passing and how she loved america. ( I love reading a peom and seeing everyones view on memories that come back)
| Posted on 2005-07-02 00:00:00 | by jsoulgirl | [ Reply to This ]

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