This write reminded me of that "footprints" thing and I realized it that it could also be about God as well so my hat is off to you for capturing true love with words and i'm going to be honest i read this several times, and it brought a smile to my face each one. favorited!
It almost sounds as if it would be a really great beginning to a song. Do you play any instruments? If you do you should definately put music to it, and maybe add a little more for music sake. Good job.
oh my gosh. i love the structure of this poem. it makes parts stand out and seem so much more powerful. the poem is so serious yet it has this wistful feeling. oh, it's so awesome! the first line really gets you lured in. kudos.
Agreed totally with them I loved the form on this I'll say it was original But then some random dude will come out of hiding and say he wrote like that first I liked the wording on this It has a message we all can relate to Relationships can be wonderful Or they can be the worst thing ever Good Job- Big Bill
Dude, i know just how u feel, ive gone through the ecxact same thing, even right now, me and my gf just broke up, and are on the verge of getting back together, but who knows, srry not to get off track, i really liked the way u spaced it, and the thought u put in it was awsome, great job...AJ