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    dots Submission Name: Salvationdots
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    Author: Katj
    ASL Info:    17/F/IL
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 103/89/24
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 850
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    Description:
       A little museing.


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    dotsSalvationdots
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    To document all that I am feeling
    Would take endless sheets of paper,
    And a life-time to read.
    But, I can not stop doing it.
    Cannot quit what has become my salvation.
    In this pen, I find my salvation.




    Submitted on 2005-07-03 06:40:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i think you've done a good job.. many of us feel that way.. the repitation of salvation thus the added emphasis is pretty cool.. i think thats what makes the poem..
    i think the lenght of ur poem is perfect.. its complete...
    | Posted on 2005-07-03 00:00:00 | by Sanjhana | [ Reply to This ]
      short and sweet. very well written. i think many of the readers can relate. writing being your salvation and writing about writing, your salvation. nice.
    | Posted on 2005-07-03 00:00:00 | by fabulousAMY | [ Reply to This ]
      You didnt really give the reader much to relate to. So it kinda leaves you hanging and isolates the author. Try to elaborate. Not to be cliché, but i def. know what you mean tho.
    | Posted on 2005-07-03 00:00:00 | by hmmmm... | [ Reply to This ]
      I like. It's short but just right. It could of been longer and descriptive but it wouldn't of been differently read , if you ask me.
    Lies
    | Posted on 2005-07-03 00:00:00 | by Lies | [ Reply to This ]
      Nicely done
    Short and indescriptive
    But unique
    Writing about writing
    I wrote about my french pen
    It's called "My Finest Pleasure"
    If you want to read it
    You did use salvation twice
    So sort of repetitive
    And I might make this longer
    But Good Job-
    Big Bill
    | Posted on 2005-07-03 00:00:00 | by Big_Bill789 | [ Reply to This ]


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