Description: Can you throw yourself against these walls? Can you be a person of honour, or are you just one of the guys?
A Sound Theory -------------------------------------------
An Irrepressible eagerness and will to live,
brings forth a new Hope.
an existence is henceforth Born Unchallenged,
due to the shallow imagination of man.
A shot of clarity resounds,
off the boundaries of the shambles of a,
"subjective sensation of hearing something" monotonic world.
I am a little confused by the capitalization where it usually doesn't go, and the lack of it at the beginning of a sentence where it does. I like the last line about being a subjective sensation, because I kind of feel like all senses are somewhat subjective, i, in the eye of the beholder (or in this case the ear).
This work does leave a lot to be imagined or interpreted by the reader, making us think. I will not ask for you specific meaning, as we all should find our own where we can. Thanks
wow this is a real poem right here. very deep and meaningful. i like the ending line. i think if you used more spacing here to add emphasis to ceratain lines it would hep alot, like seperating the last line from the poem would make it more powerful, people tend to skim read when it looks like a paragraph you know?
Irrepressible Hope Born Unchallenged... was this meant to make sense? these words you have capitalized? coz it does AND it inspires me... it fits into what you have written here. sadly there is hardly ever enough eagerness and will to live... really... its such a sad state of affairs to be in... my theory is that there is always hope... always...
Submission Name: A Sound Theory
