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    dots Submission Name: Emotions Crying Outdots
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    Author: iluvpoetry_1
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 802/433/117
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsEmotions Crying Outdots
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    Everyday it's the same thing
    Life
    Stress
    Torture
    Pain
    Today it's
    Hate
    Rumors
    Betrayal between two good friends
    Endless emotions bleeding through my heart
    Not healing, everyday it gets worse
    There's a hole in my soul
    Getting bigger and swells up into my throat
    Choking on the emotins crying to get out
    Feeling helpless and alone
    Trying to keep together
    And make it through
    Tears coming
    Almost dripping out of my eyes
    Now it's time
    To go up into the sky
    Life doesn't need me anyway
    ~akaila evonne~




    Submitted on 2005-07-03 11:18:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      There's a hole in my soul
    Getting bigger and swells up into my throat
    Choking on the emotins crying to get out

    it's like u were just hopeless letting ur soul drip through ur pen or ur fingers if u typed it first. i liked the last lines too becuz they showed how ur hopelessness overcame u and u just kinda fave yup on life to go on to a better place.
    "troy"
    | Posted on 2005-08-25 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem is...unexplainable. I mean no words can describe it. Its beautifully written, yet its written about such ugly things. Things which we all feel (well not all, preps seem well off...bleh) and writing is a great way to let them out. Thanks for sharing this.
    | Posted on 2005-07-05 00:00:00 | by Dark Romantic | [ Reply to This ]
      This peom is great. I really expresses and gives an account of all life's tribulations and negatives. Oh, i must ask, did u write this because u actually went through these things cuz if u did good way of expressing ur self. And if u did not i must say u are a good poet it order to write about something u have not felt

    Jay
    | Posted on 2005-07-04 00:00:00 | by jreklaw | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this. it shows a lot of emotion but i also get the feeling that that line betrayl between to good friends is something thats happend in your life im probably wrong though

    ~Gena~
    | Posted on 2005-07-03 00:00:00 | by luvy | [ Reply to This ]



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