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    dots Submission Name: Bourbon Bluesdots
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    Author: homeless
    ASL Info:    30
    Elite Ratio:    7.61 - 29/18/23
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 1049
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 268



    Description:
       Snapshots of Life.
    Be honest.


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    dotsBourbon Bluesdots
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    A glass full of reflection
    A pocket full of change
    Muddy Waters drown sorrows;
    warmly sliding past the chill

    Eager is the hustler
    Willing is the fool
    Mingled like two angry lovers
    Broken glass and shattered you




    Submitted on 2005-07-03 21:48:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It was short and yet, It spoke of so much!Honesty in images without the need to explain the cause away. I don't really know what to saw but wow!
    | Posted on 2005-07-06 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]
      Wonderfully written.You have gathered all those little things of life and created a wonderful piece.Quite liked what I read.
    | Posted on 2005-07-04 00:00:00 | by vedanta19 | [ Reply to This ]
      I love the way you put this together. I'm sorry i'm just not happy right now...so i don't know what to say. So maybe thats why i don't get the message...But this is a good job.
    Kay
    | Posted on 2005-07-03 00:00:00 | by Kay | [ Reply to This ]
      I think I like your writing enough to tell you that I hope you have a wonderful existance. This is very good. You are very good with words, and I really don't have a lot else to say. Good job.

    Hopefully,
    Not her Hero anymore.
    | Posted on 2005-07-03 00:00:00 | by bloodwing | [ Reply to This ]


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