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    dots Submission Name: Questions of this earth!dots
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    Author: patrick o_riley
    ASL Info:    16, male, ontario
    Elite Ratio:    3.94 - 70/91/25
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 810
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       What do u think about ower earth. This is some questions i alwas ask myslef and wonder about , read it and think about them (i dare you!)


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    dotsQuestions of this earth!dots
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    Step by step we walk this earth,
    Looking for the truth.
    The reason why there's a thing called birth,
    And where's the fountain of youth.

    There we would drink for the well,
    And we would live for ever.
    Is there really a place called hell?
    if there is you would be there forever.

    Will there be an invasion of earth,
    Or even an alien attack?
    Do those aliens actually give birth,
    Is life really just like that?

    Is there really been life at all,
    Is it all just an illusion?
    Is there really short or tall?
    Will existence have a short conclusion?

    Life might not be very important,
    We might not be real.
    For all we know we might be very important,
    Or just a hand for someone to deal.

    After all these questions and still no answer,
    No one dosen't really care.
    Someone will be still an awesome dancer,
    And god will hear our prayers.




    Submitted on 2005-07-04 20:24:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very interesting, it gives a new perception on humanity...very original. It has a hint of sadness in it, which gives it an interesting lilt. Very good work.

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    | Posted on 2005-07-05 00:00:00 | by OrionsStorm | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice I like
    Is there really been life at all,
    Is it all just an illusion?
    Is there really short or tall?
    Will existence have a short conclusion?

    Life might not be very important,
    We might not be real.
    For all we know we might be very important,
    Or just a hand for someone to deal.
    I can relate keep up the good work peace & stay safe..
    | Posted on 2005-07-04 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]


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