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    dots Submission Name: Thank youdots
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    Author: Anchiale
    ASL Info:    32/F/AL
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 88/73/14
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 1453
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    Bytes: 420



    Description:
       This was something I wrote many years ago to my ex-boyfriend after he left me to see if he could love other people. The funny thing is, he has not had a girlfriend since, lol.


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    dotsThank youdots
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    I must say this to express,
    my gratitude for you doing what was best,
    and even though I hated your decision, nevertheless,
    I owe you for my new happiness.

    Thank you for letting me find a strength I never knew,
    Thank you for showing me that prayers really do come through,
    and I wish the best for you in all you do,
    because the best in me was revealed without you.




    Submitted on 2004-04-10 22:46:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i love this lil poem great message thingy the only thing i would suggest is either don't make all the lines rhyme or break the two lil things into seperate ones but im crazy so you might not wanna listen to me, i think its funny that he hasn't had a g/f sense.
    Pryncess
    | Posted on 2004-04-11 00:00:00 | by PryncessVynom | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow! This is really upbeat and [censored]y. But beautifully concealed. On the face of it you are a nice girl.
    Torie
    | Posted on 2004-04-10 00:00:00 | by Torie | [ Reply to This ]
      i really liked this 1,i love the feeling of finding strength in places u never thought ud find it,ive never been able 2 capture it in words.kudos!
    | Posted on 2004-04-10 00:00:00 | by FaerieTale | [ Reply to This ]
      love it.Ican relate though i know its not good feedback.But the rhyme scheme is nice and free flowing.I've also prayed to God about all my exs(while they were my bfs of course) but well we were not meant to be i guess.. lovely poem
    | Posted on 2004-05-03 00:00:00 | by whyme | [ Reply to This ]
      oh love the satiric effect too.(oops, sorry forgot in first post) arggggg i sometime hate this too short thingy that comes up...but only sometimes..
    | Posted on 2004-05-03 00:00:00 | by whyme | [ Reply to This ]


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