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Author: star_on_fire22
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i wrote this in a very emotion time of my life.. i finally get over one guy just to find coded and he does me so wrong...


we met by chance,
it was just our luck
we met while making songs with mac
i remember that day so clearly.
freak and the whole gang was there.
i heard your voice and i began to soar.
i never thought i could feel like that,
just from hearing a voice.
i never saw you face to face,
but with your typed words, your voice and your pictures
i knew i was in love with you.
i remember the first time you said i love you to me.
you tried to act sly and be my puppy dog.
i was the master whom you loved.
you said it was just playing but i knew you didnt lie.
it was love,
even if it was just through instant messanger.
we talked everynight on the computer,
and countless times on the phone.
i only wished you lived closer,
as did you,
you told me of how you would hold me in your arms until i fell asleep,
if only you were here.
you lived three time zones away.
much too far for it to work.
than you met my friends,
started acting all cool to them and dissing me
i had to do something so i lied to you
this caused fight and we almost stopped talking.
but miraculously,
you forgave me.
but i know things will never be the same.
now we are just friends,
you have met some one new already.
how could you replace me so fast??
did you ever really love me?
i feel so hurt,
this girl,
the one you now love,
she lives in MY town,
how did you find her?
in my town when you live accross the country.
i wonder if when you talk to her on the phone
do you remember our late night talks?
remember when i went to the hospital and i stayed on the phone with you until i had to leave?
you thought i forgot you but i didnt call because it was long distance.
i miss you even though we have never seen each other in person,
my dear coded,
my internet puppy,

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