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    dots Submission Name: Why?dots
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    Author: Akai_Ame
    Elite Ratio:    4.79 - 223/180/46
    Words: 215
    Class/Type: Rant/Venting
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    dotsWhy?dots
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    why?
    why must everything you love be taken?
    Is love worth a fight?
    ___----___
    I once thought it could be.
    Thought that no matter what, maybe.
    Just maybe all that we go through, was worth it.

    That someday, when life had ended.
    When we're either in Heven or Hell.
    We'll look back on this short life.
    And KNOW that we did everything right.

    Ha! Like we could do everything right.
    You try and try, but don't gain a inch.
    You fight and fight, but never win the war.
    Spending you're whole existince trying to win.

    But do you?
    Nope. Never. That would be too easy.
    And we all know for a fact,
    that life is anything but.

    The one you love, calls you by another's name.
    Acts like he doesn't know you.
    Pretending it's all the same.
    You loved him with everything you are.

    But when it's done, do you have something?
    Even the smallest thing to show for it?
    Of course not. That would be to simple

    And we all know for a fact,
    That life is anything but.

    So why i ask?
    Why do we think love is worth it.
    When the greater amount of time on Earth,
    Is spent with nothing but hurt.




    Submitted on 2005-07-06 13:41:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      god that made me sad just reading it i hope you find the answers to your questions and that no one ever hurts you like that again -sadensilk
    | Posted on 2007-05-13 00:00:00 | by sadensilk | [ Reply to This ]
      This was a very depressing poem. Its so painful to see my little sister so beat up. I'm sorry that this happened to you, but you know that you are better than he is. He is a horrible person for ever betraying you the way he did. I think you should move on, find someone who will treat you how you deserve to be treated. Its obvious that a guy like him doesn't deserve you, anyone who could ever be so cold as to call you by another person's name should be shot and buried in a ditch. -Kenji
    | Posted on 2005-07-10 00:00:00 | by Kenji Light | [ Reply to This ]
      "You loved him with everything you are." loved this line.
    you'r talking of hard issues which all of question but have no answers to.. the poem makes one think... but since there are no clear cut answers it left me depressed for a minute.
    | Posted on 2005-07-06 00:00:00 | by Sanjhana | [ Reply to This ]



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