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    dots Submission Name: frosty glassdots
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    Author: sug90
    ASL Info:    14/F/U.S.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 69/93/34
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 178
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 561



    Description:
       this is kind of like a love poem. It can either be to a person or to God... choose which u think fits best. And please help with a title please.


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    dotsfrosty glassdots
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    While looking through this frosted glass
    I thought I glimpsed your face
    And considering I had seen for the first time,
    A poetic description of beauty
    Yet words leave You incomplete

    My trophies waste away
    The worthless earnings of my days
    Glimmer in this fake, florescent light
    And my heart doesn’t beat
    Until I see You again

    You creep into my dreams
    To save me from my nightmares
    And when I wake, I’ll love you
    Because that is all I have to do




    Submitted on 2005-07-06 14:48:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like it. this piece shows that you truley r a excelent wrighter. and in the description well that says that more then likely you did not right this about anyone specific. insted it seems like you just wrote this for anyone and i love how you let the reader/listner decide for them selves what it means. cause thats what true art is it somthing most people appreasiate (excuse my spelling) cause for everyone it means somthijg different. for instance STAIRWAY TO HEAVEN by Led Zepplin i must have heard a millon and one versions of what people trhink the song is about. anyways great job and great talent
    | Posted on 2005-07-07 00:00:00 | by kristian | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the way that the poem can be constrewed by the reader. I think that it is better to be to a person than to god. If our hearts stopped beating until we saw god again, then we would die immediately after birth. It seems like a poem about yur love towards another human being. But enough of my ramblings, I think you did a good job.
    LeAnna
    | Posted on 2005-07-06 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]



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